In three to four sentences, write a narrative paragraph that includes two transitions. The transitions should tell information about two of the following: what is happening when, where the action is happening, or whether time has passed between events.(4 points)

Question

In three to four sentences, write a narrative paragraph that includes two transitions. The transitions should tell information about two of the following: what is happening when, where the action is happening, or whether time has passed between events.(4 points)

Short Answer Rubric (4 points)
Points Awarded Criteria
4
The answer is very clear.

The answer is fully supported by details.

There may be a few errors in grammar, usage, or mechanics. Errors do not interfere with meaning.

3
The answer is mostly clear.

The answer is supported by mostly relevant details.

There are a few errors in grammar, usage, or mechanics. Errors do not interfere with meaning.

2
The answer is somewhat clear.

Details are weak or not related.

There are some errors in grammar, usage, and mechanics. Errors interfere with meaning.

1
The answer is not clear.

There are few or no supporting details.

There are many errors in grammar, usage, and mechanics. Errors interfere with meaning.

0 The question is not answered.

Answer 1

As the sun began to set over the serene lake, the group of friends gathered around the campfire, sharing stories and laughter. After roasting marshmallows and making s'mores, they decided to take a midnight stroll along the moonlit shore, the cool breeze rustling through the trees. Hours passed as they walked and talked, enjoying the peacefulness of the night before eventually heading back to their tents to rest under the starry sky.