The two children approached the cave cautiously. The interior looked dark and damp. Prodding each other gently, each child tried to get the other to enter the cave first. In three to five sentences, rewrite the paragraph using dialogue to make the story more vivid.
write as a 7th grader
"Hey, I dare you to go in first," Sally whispered to Timmy as they stood outside the cave entrance.
"No way, you go first!" Timmy replied nervously, poking Sally in the arm.
"I'm scared too, but I'll do it if you do," Sally challenged, her voice trembling slightly.
After a moment of hesitation, Timmy took a deep breath and bravely stepped into the dark cave.