Read the following introductory paragraph, which is missing a hook:
It is hard to believe that an entire nation could find hope in the form of an undersized and overweight horse, but Laura Hillenbrand’s book Seabiscuit: An American Legend makes that case. The book describes how the career of the little racehorse mirrored the rise and fall of America’s fortunes during the last half of the Great Depression.
Which option below makes the most effective hook?
The movie Seabiscuit made millions of dollars and was nominated for seven Academy Awards. The story of a racehorse, it is an inspirational tale about overcoming challenges. A line in the film, said by Seabiscuit’s jockey, sums it up: “You know, everyone thinks that we found this broken-down horse and fixed him, but we didn't. He fixed us. Every one of us. And I guess in a way, we kinda fixed each other, too.”
If you saw the movie Seabiscuit and loved it, then do yourself a favor and read the book. It is so good!
Some people are inspired by tales of space adventures or epic journeys across imaginary lands. But I have always preferred non-fiction. That is why I enjoyed the story of the horse named Seabiscuit.
During the late 1930’s, the #1 newsmaker wasn’t a president, movie star, or sports hero, it was a horse. His name was Seabiscuit, and Americans not only read about him in the news, they bought his merchandise and broke track records watching him run. Forty million people regularly tuned in on the radio to hear Seabiscuit’s races, including President Roosevelt, who sometimes delayed cabinet meetings to listen.