The two children approached the cave cautiously. The interior looked dark and damp. Prodding each other gently, each child tried to get the other to enter the cave first.
In three to five sentences, rewrite the paragraph using dialogue to make the story more vivid
make it sound like a 5th and add a little grammer mistakes. dont make it ovice
"Woah, this cave looks spooky," whispered Tommy, nudging his friend Sarah tentatively.
Sarah rolled her eyes, "Come on, you go first!"
Tommy shook his head, "No way, you go!"
After a moment of silent staring, Sarah exclaimed, "Fine, let's go together then!"
make it a bit longer
"Hey, do you think we should go in there?" Tommy asked, eyeing the dark entrance warily.
Sarah shrugged, "I don't know, do you think it's safe?"
"I'm not sure, but I think we should check it out," Tommy replied, finally gathering the courage to step forward.
Sarah hesitated, then nodded, "Okay, but you go first."
Tommy shook his head, "No way, you go ahead."
After a moment of back-and-forth, they both took a deep breath and entered the cave together.