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I think it's really cool that sharks have been around for millions of years. They are such interesting creatures with all their sharp teeth and strong bodies. I saw a documentary once that said sharks never stop swimming or they'll die because they need water passing over their gills to breathe. Isn't that crazy? Sharks are also really important for keeping the ocean ecosystem balanced by eating smaller fish. I hope I get to see a shark in real life one day, but I would definitely want to stay far away from it!
