Good day bot,
I need you to write an essay for me with these instructions.
topic: How some hikers dealt with an unexpected storm
Characters: John, Ellie, Ford, Lily, mike - All are 18 and friends
Must be created out of the blue meaning just made.
Your narrative must be at least 400 words
Your narrative must include dialogue
Your narrative must have a clear organization, starting with the exposition & ending with a resolution. It should follow the elements of a plot diagram
Make it sound like a 7th grader wrote it
The setting takes place in a forest in the U.S. (and also the storm comes, thats the issue they must solve)
After that make sure you have everything on this check list.
Does the introduction engage the reader?
Does the introduction introduce the narrator or main characters?
Does the introduction set the context for the story such as describing the setting or introducing a conflict?
Does the sequence of events unfold naturally and logically?
I used dialogue at LEAST TWICE at the right times to develop the characters and move the story forward.
Is there at least one conflict that is introduced and solved? What is it?
Is the pacing effective for the story? Does the story move along?
The main character or one character has learned something or changed from the beginning of the story somehow.
I have clear paragraphs
I used a variety of transition words, phrases, and clauses to convey sequence and signal shifts from one time frame or setting to another
Does the conclusion follow and reflect on the narrated experiences? The ending is clear, not unfinished.
Did I use description and sensory language to express my ideas? Students can use the following process for using descriptive and sensory language.
Add adjectives before nouns where necessary
Change vague pronouns and nouns to more specific nouns such as “the girl” to “the feisty little elementary student with blond pig-tails”
Change vague and overused verbs and adjectives to more lively ones such as “walked” to “gradually strolled.”
I checked for spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization errors.
The essay is written using MLA formatting
Title: A Hiking Disaster
In the forest of the U.S., five friends, John, Ellie, Ford, Lily, and Mike, all 18 years old, decided to go on a hiking trip. Little did they know that an unexpected storm would soon change their plans and test their friendship.
As they hiked deeper into the forest, dark clouds started to gather overhead, and the wind began to pick up. Ellie shivered, "I think it's going to rain soon," she said, looking up anxiously.
John, the leader of the group, scanned the sky and frowned. "We need to find shelter fast," he declared, urgency in his voice.
They quickened their pace, but before they could find a suitable spot, the storm hit. Rain poured down, soaking them to the bone, and thunder roared in the distance. The friends huddled together, seeking refuge under a large tree, but it offered little protection from the elements.
"I can't believe this is happening!" Lily exclaimed, her voice barely audible over the sound of the rain.
Ford tried to stay positive. "We just need to wait it out. It can't last forever," he said, trying to reassure the group.
As the storm raged on, they realized they needed to come up with a plan. "We can't stay out here all night," Mike stated, his teeth chattering from the cold.
John nodded, determination in his eyes. "We need to find a way to make a shelter. Let's look for branches and leaves to build a lean-to."
The friends sprang into action, gathering materials and working together to construct a makeshift shelter. It wasn't perfect, but it provided some protection from the rain and wind.
After an hour of hard work, they crawled into their shelter, exhausted but grateful to be out of the storm. As they huddled together for warmth, they realized just how much they relied on each other in times of crisis.
The storm eventually passed, and the friends emerged from their shelter, wet but safe. As they continued their hike back to civilization, they knew that they had faced a challenge together and come out stronger because of it.
In the end, the unexpected storm had brought them closer together, teaching them the importance of teamwork and resilience in the face of adversity.
MLA Format:
Title: A Hiking Disaster
By: [Student's Name]
Date: [Date]
Works Cited:
[insert any sources used, if applicable]