Read the paragraph.
Technology, like life, evolves to meet new challenges. People wanted a faster tool for making mathematical calculations, so they developed the processor. The need for a more efficient way to transport data inspired the Internet.
Which revision would strengthen this introductory paragraph and generate reader interest?
include a quotation from a famous inventor
include the number of new technologies developed in the past ten years
include example of other fascinating technologies
include a metaphor to describe benefits of new technologies