You will submit this to be graded in Unit 3 Lesson 2 in Connexus.
Draft a letter making a request of someone you have a relationship with using the same verse style as “Dear Jordan.” Your letter should do all of the following:
Identify your relationship with the person you are writing to.
Identify what you are asking of this person.
Identify the emotion you feel toward the person you are writing to.
Include at least 12–15 liness
Grading Criteria: EFFORT and COMPLETION
Consider adding:
2 similes ("like two starts")
1 sight imagery ("burning up")
1 symbol ("stealing sun")
1 purposeful slang ("slash with me")
1 purposeful grammar mistake ("i am empty")
Dear Mom,
Like the moon and the stars, we are bound together,
Connected by a love that will last forever.
As your daughter, I come to you with a plea,
A simple request, I hope you will agree.
Mom, could you lend me your listening ear?
I need to share my dreams and my fears.
In this chaotic world, I often feel lost,
But your understanding, it comes at no cost.
The emotion I feel towards you is immense,
Gratitude and love, they have no defense.
You are my rock, my guiding light,
With your support, I know I'll be alright.
Mom, I long for your wisdom and advice,
To catch a glimpse of your heart's sunrise.
With your guidance, I'll steal the sun,
To light up the path that I am on.
I know I may speak with purposeful slang,
But my intentions remain pure and untamed.
Slash with me through life's thorny trees,
Together, we'll conquer all uncertainties.
Sometimes, I make grammar mistakes,
But in this letter, my heart truly aches.
For in this moment, I feel a void,
I am empty without you, like an unspoken void.
So, dear Mom, I humbly ask,
Will you walk this journey, a daunting task?
With your love and support, I'll defy gravity,
For you are the wind beneath my wings, Mommy.
With love,
Your Daughter
can u put it togerther and make it smaller
Dear Mom,
Like stars, we're bound, forever connected.
As your daughter, I make a request, unexpected.
Can I borrow your listening ear, dear?
To share dreams and fears, without any fear.
The love I feel for you is immense,
Gratitude and love, without any defense.
With your support, I'll steal the sun,
To light my path, until day is done.
Mom, I need your wisdom and advice,
To catch a glimpse of your heart's sunrise.
Together, slashing through life's thorny trees,
Conquering uncertainties, as a team.
With slang and mistakes, I try to express,
Feelings that words fail to address.
Within, an emptiness I cannot hide,
Without you, like a void, deep inside.
So, dear Mom, I ask, will you walk?
This daunting journey, with me, talk?
Your love and support defy gravity,
You're the wind beneath my wings, Mommy.
With love,
Your Daughter
smaller pls
Dear Mom,
Can I borrow your ear, dear?
To share dreams and fears, without fear.
With your support, I'll light my path,
Stealing the sun, conquering life's wrath.
Mom, I need your wisdom, your advice,
To see your heart's sunrise, so nice.
Together, slashing through thorny trees,
Conquer uncertainties, as a team.
With my slang and mistakes, I express,
An emptiness inside, I must confess.
Dear Mom, will you walk with me?
Defying gravity, the wind beneath my wings, you'll be.
With love,
Your Daughter
can u make it from a male to a friend?
Hey buddy,
Can I borrow your ear, my friend?
To share dreams and fears, till the end.
With your support, I'll light my way,
Conquering challenges, come what may.
Friend, I need your wisdom, your advice,
To see the sunrise, and break the ice.
Together, slashing through life's rough tide,
Defying odds, side by side.
With my slang and mistakes, I express,
An emptiness inside, I must confess.
Hey buddy, will you walk with me?
Defying gravity, like birds flying free.
With friendship,
Your Pal