Imagine how the story might continue after Jorge enters the secret passageway.
Using 3rd person point of view, write an ending to this story.
Use sensory language to describe where the passageway leads.
Include a conversation between Jorge and the new character Althea. Must have at least 4 lines of dialogue, properly punctuated. Resolution & Conclusion- How does the story end?
Use active voice. Avoid using too many being verbs like is, was, were, etc
3 paragraphs minimum
How is the conflict resolved? Does Jorge go back home? How does the story end? What has Jorge learned from this experience?
As Jorge cautiously made his way through the secret passageway, he could feel the cool moisture in the air, and hear the faint echo of his footsteps reverberating against the stone walls. The passageway seemed to stretch on endlessly, with its winding twists and turns. He walked for what felt like an eternity, until finally, a sliver of light appeared ahead. As he reached the end, he stepped out into a hidden garden, blossoming with vibrant flowers of every color. It was a sight that took his breath away.
Just as Jorge was taking in the beauty of his surroundings, a soft voice interrupted his thoughts. "Welcome, traveler," it said. Startled, Jorge turned around to see a woman with silver hair and bright, piercing blue eyes standing before him. "Who are you?" he asked, his voice trembling. "I am Althea," she replied gently. "And this is the Hidden Garden, a place where only those who are seeking answers can find."
Curiosity urging him forward, Jorge approached Althea cautiously. "What answers can I find here?" he asked, his eyes searching hers. Althea smiled knowingly. "The answers you seek lie within yourself," she replied. "This garden has the power to show you the path you need to take, if you are willing to listen." Overwhelmed by the mysteriousness of it all, Jorge found himself opening up to Althea. As they spoke, she guided him in reflecting on his experiences and his desires, helping him uncover the strength and courage within him.
Days turned into weeks as Jorge immersed himself in the wisdom of the Hidden Garden. He learned to trust his instincts, embrace uncertainty, and follow his passions. Finally, with a renewed sense of purpose and a heart filled with gratitude, Jorge made the decision to go back home. As he bid farewell to Althea and the Hidden Garden, he knew that he had changed profoundly. He had discovered that the answers he sought were not outside of himself, but deeply embedded within. With this newfound understanding, Jorge returned home, determined to live a life true to himself and his own dreams.