Which is the most effective way to combine sentences 11 and 12?
The league produced many fine players, Mary “Bonnie” Baker and Dorothy Kamenshek.
The league produced many fine players, and they include Mary “Bonnie” Baker and Dorothy Kamenshek.
The league produced many fine players, including Mary “Bonnie” Baker and Dorothy Kamenshek.
The league produced many fine players, Mary “Bonnie” Baker and Dorothy Kamenshek also was fine.
The most effective way to combine sentences 11 and 12 is:
"The league produced many fine players, including Mary “Bonnie” Baker and Dorothy Kamenshek."