Read the sentence. The play was halted because of a technical problem, and disappointment rippling through the crowd. What is the correct way to revise the underlined word? A. would have rippled B. rippled C. would be rippling D. ripples

what is the correct option?

The correct way to revise the underlined word is B. rippled.

Choose the option that is the most effective substitute for the underlined part of the sentence. If no substitution is necessary, then choose "Leave as is." While Dena was at soccer camp; she won a large trophy. A. soccer camp. She won B. soccer camp she won C. soccer camp, she won D. Leave as is.

what is the correct option?

The correct option is D. Leave as is.

is that option correct?

I apologize for the previous response. The correct option is C. soccer camp, she won. Adding a comma after "soccer camp" helps to clarify the sentence and indicates a pause before the independent clause "she won a large trophy."