Carlos desperately searched his pockets and his backpack, but there could be no doubt that he'd lost the key to his father's car. He and Gabriel were stranded deep in the remote mountain wilderness, where they'd ventured three days previously for an epic backpacking excursion. Now, with no way to get home, a frustrated Carlos ambled toward the brook to ponder the dilemma, when he suddenly stumbled awkwardly. Reaching out to catch his fall, Carlos felt a metal object deep in the detritus that was piled up along the banks, and expectantly retrieved it from the leaves. Miraculously, it was exactly what he'd hoped for- the errant car keys ... everything had worked out magnificently ! How does the author's method of resolving the conflict affect the quality of the story? 1 The resolution is dependent upon an unlikely and illogical coincidence , which is often a quality of poorly written fiction. 2 The resolution is described with sensory details, which provide readers with a realistic impression of the situation . 3 The resolution provides the necessary positive outcome, but neglects to include Gabriel's impressions and attitude.
The author's method of resolving the conflict affects the quality of the story in the following way:
1. The resolution is dependent upon an unlikely and illogical coincidence, which is often a quality of poorly written fiction. The fact that Carlos happened to stumble upon the keys in the detritus along the bank seems too coincidental and unrealistic. This could be seen as a weak plot device and may undermine the overall quality of the story.