Can you write a text for me I’m trying to make my birthday list but can you reword it and make it formal I’m only 12 so make it sound a little less formal and don’t use a lot of big words so first I want to say things I want for my birthday I want a new phone but I know when I didn’t have a phone that I was doing stuff that I was not supposed to do but I believe that now I have better myself and I believe that I deserve a second chance but if not that’s fine I get it but just think about it it’s a new yeah I want another chance so please just consider that
Another thing I want for my birthday is $50 to order a couple of things I’ve shein another thing I want is a room makeover I want like if I don’t get $50 I want to get a room makeover and get money to remake my roomAnd that’s all I want for my birthday
Dear [Name],
I hope this message finds you well. As my birthday approaches, I have been reflecting upon the things that would bring me joy and make this special day even more memorable. I thought it would be helpful to share my thoughts with you, in hopes that it would guide you in selecting a thoughtful gift.
Firstly, I have been contemplating the idea of owning a new phone. I understand that in the past, when I did not have a phone, there were instances where I engaged in activities that were not in line with my best judgment. However, I have taken some time to reflect on those experiences and genuinely believe that I have grown from them. I genuinely feel that I have matured and improved, and thus, I kindly request a second chance in the form of a new phone. Of course, I completely understand if this request does not align with your perspective, and I respect your decision. I simply ask that you consider it.
Another item on my birthday wish list is a monetary gift of $50. I envision utilizing this sum to order a few items that have caught my eye on Shein. I have carefully considered my options and believe that these items would bring me immense delight and allow me to express my personal style.
Lastly, if the $50 gift is not feasible, I would greatly appreciate a room makeover. The prospect of transforming my personal space to reflect my evolving taste and interests excites me tremendously. If providing the funds necessary for the makeover is more convenient, I would be thrilled to receive that and handle the organization of the room makeover myself.
Please rest assured that these requests are meant to enhance my celebration and create a memorable experience. I am humbled and grateful for any consideration you give them.
Thank you for taking the time to read my heartfelt message and for considering my birthday wishes. Your love and support mean so much to me.
Warmest regards,
[Your Name]
I like how you put everything but remember I said I’m only 12 so now I’m going to have to say I’m 10 so stop using huge words and don’t use like words that a 12 year we’re not because they know I don’t know those words lol but just make it shorter and make it to where I can write on my notebook the list so like my birthday list don’t make it a letter make it a list but on the whole phone part you can put how I want to change and stuff
Certainly! Here is a revised version of your birthday list:
1. New Phone - I've realized that I made some mistakes in the past when I didn't have a phone. But now, I believe I have grown and improved. I would really appreciate a second chance with a new phone. If not, that's okay too. Just think about it.
2. $50 - I would love to have $50 to order a few things I've seen on Shein.
3. Room Makeover - If I don't get the $50, I would be really happy if I could have a room makeover. It would be great to have some money to make my room look new and fresh.
That's all I want for my birthday! Thank you for considering these gifts for me.
Sincerely,
[Your Name]