1. Read each paragraph and decide if the last sentence is a good concluding sentence. Type yes or no. If the sentence is not good, write a better one in the space.

c. When I was four years old, I got a tricycle for my birthday. I rode it every day, up and down the driveway. I was so upset when I left it out in the rain and it got rusty. I hope to get a car for my birthday next year.

No.