Review Mr Wilmuth’s conversation with Carl Phillips. Analyzes choice of language such as using listenin’ and ain’t. How does Mr. Wilmuth’s information language style add to the overall feeling of his story? Elaborate on how applying more formal language might change the way we interpret Mr Wilmuth’s narrative. Identify a specific part in the interview where incorporating more formal words could potentially change the impact of his storytelling. Let a second grader understand. Use 6 sentences at most.
Mr. Wilmuth’s conversation with Carl Phillips in "Invasion from Mars" is filled with informal language, such as using words like "listenin'" and "ain't." This choice of language adds to the overall feeling of the story by making it sound more authentic and relatable. Mr. Wilmuth's use of colloquial language makes him seem like an ordinary person, making his story more believable and engaging. However, if Mr. Wilmuth were to use more formal language, it might change the way we interpret his narrative. For example, in the interview, if he said, "I was observing the luminous, disc-shaped object in the sky," instead of "I seen this shiny, round thing up there," it would feel less personal and less vivid. A second grader might find it easier to understand and connect with Mr. Wilmuth's story because of his use of simple, informal language.
