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Smedley’s informal club gatherings proved popular, and in 1924 we organized the first official club meeting.


Smedley’s informal club gatherings proved popular, and in 1924 he organized the first official club meeting.


Smedley’s informal club gatherings proved popular, and, in 1924 we organized the first official club meeting.


Smedley’s informal club gatherings proved popular, and, in 1924 he organized the first official club meeting.

Smedley’s informal club gatherings proved popular, and in 1924 he organized the first official club meeting.