Rewrite the following email, retaining everything marked in quotations.
"Dear [name], "
I hope this message finds you well! I am writing to request your help with a class assignment that has the potential to set me on a successful career path. I am taking a course on managing organizations as part of my undergraduate program. I would be grateful for your help with one of the required exercises for the course, the Best Career Exercise. This exercise is a unique story- and contribution-based approach to feedback-seeking and analysis.
I am asking people who work in the field of "[XXXX]" to provide me with thoughts on the various career paths within this field. I would also like to know the pros and cons associated with this industry.
Please email your responses to me by "[insert date]". Furthermore, I would greatly appreciate it if you would allow me to interview you over "[specify interview platform]". Thank you so much for your cooperation. I will keep all responses anonymous and will be sure to tell you what I learn after this exercise.
Kind regards,
Bucky
"Dear [name],
I hope this message finds you well! I am reaching out to ask for your assistance regarding a class assignment with significant potential to shape my future career. As part of my undergraduate program, I am currently enrolled in a course on managing organizations. Within this course, one of the required exercises is the Best Career Exercise, which takes a unique approach by utilizing stories and contributions for feedback-seeking and analysis.
In order to complete this exercise, I am seeking input from professionals working in the field of "[XXXX]". Specifically, I am interested in hearing your thoughts on the various career paths available within this industry, as well as the associated advantages and disadvantages.
I kindly request that you email me your responses by "[insert date]". Additionally, I would greatly appreciate it if you would be willing to participate in an interview via "[specify interview platform]". Thank you very much for your cooperation. Rest assured, all responses will be kept anonymous, and I will be sure to share what I learn from this exercise with you.
Warm regards,
Bucky"