Laya waited to put the muffin in the oven she knew as soon as they went in the smell would let the cat out of the bag she never managed to surprise her sister with breakfast on her birthday Mai always woke up first or even if she didn’t caught laya mid cook Which revision would help the paragraph use more sensory language
Laya hesitated to place the fragrant muffin batter into the warm oven. She knew that the moment she did, the mouthwatering aroma would give away her secret surprise for her sister's birthday breakfast. Mai always had a way of waking up early, so Laya had to be careful not to get caught in the middle of preparing the meal.
