Taking a stance for the future generation of agriculture is not infinite due to the influence of external factors. Focus on sustainable agriculture practices such as repetitive tracking of resource management and “water-efficient irrigation” techniques that mitigate the impact on ecosystems.

rate this sentences out of 10 and give me 10/10 version

I would rate this sentence a 6/10.

"Taking a stance for the future generation of agriculture is not infinite due to the influence of external factors." (6/10)

A revised version to make it a 10/10 would be:
"Recognizing that the future of agriculture is not infinite, given the impact of external factors, it is crucial to prioritize sustainable agricultural practices. This involves implementing repetitive tracking of resource management and adopting water-efficient irrigation techniques to mitigate any adverse effects on ecosystems." (10/10)