Introduction
Population growth. The ticking time bomb. Now burdened with the weight of 8 billion souls, our quest to find a solution has become increasingly difficult. Resources like freshwater, arable islands and fisheries are depleting rapidly, and the competition for survival grows more intense every day. Extraordinary circumstances have become our everyday reality. Today, our planet is at stake, and we soon have to face the sobering reality of overpopulation as a significant threat to our humanity. As writers dedicated to upholding the truth and protecting readers from fraud, our job is becoming harder in the face of fluctuating and unreliable media. A journal article by John Wilmoth indicates that as the global population surpasses 8 billion, it could potentially result in 40 units of CO2 emissions. This trajectory in the future necessitates raising awareness among present populations about the implications it holds for our society.
My name is Daniel Bark, and thank you for nominating me for the 2023 Walkey Awards for excellence in journalism. It's an honour to see everyone attending this event, and I can’t help but recognise some familiar faces too. Today, I will be exposing the dangers of overpopulation and confronting issues that cannot be longer ignored. What price would you pay?
Body 1 and 2 (problem, consequence, and reaction)
In 2023, the ever-growing global population will be more pertinent than ever. This is now out of our control, as our current skills and technology are not developed enough to reduce it. Generally, a larger population necessitates more food, water, and carbon dioxide, contagiously putting pressure on the earth’s ability to replace used resources. The relentless expansion of demand for food and housing is tearing the ecosystem apart. Due to such an increase in such short periods of time, the population reached 8 billion on November 15, 2022, and is striving for 9 billion at a consistent rate. Can you imagine what would happen with this reserved, cruel contact? Lack of attention and neglecting to address overpopulation will be a rolling snowball, and it will be too late to realise the consequences for the well-being of the current and future generations. Our ecosystems will be torn down and replaced with houses and farmland, which will increase social inequality. Issac Asimov nailed the core of the issue;
“Democracy cannot survive overpopulation. As you put more and more people into the world, the value of life not only declines, but disappears. It doesn’t matter If someone dies.”
Extensive research underlines the desire of enforcement to promptly tackle the environmental and resource management challenges associated with the growing global population. Globally, there is no specific target, and all the stakeholders are at risk of not being able to be treated fairly, not being able to follow the Australian government guarantee of providing benefits such as adequate healthcare and infrastructure, and most importantly, a heightened chance of ecological collapse. The presented evidence and supported statements substantiate my main point that overpopulation is a major threat that needs more attention and awareness.
Not only that, but as developing nations also transition to higher social classes, overpopulation can strain limited resources and infrastructure, leading to widespread poverty and unrest. One example is Bangladesh, which has recently improved in the textile and garment industries, meaning there is an optimistic chance of transitioning to a developed country within its population of 173 million. Not too far away, the lower social classes begin transitioning to developed countries, further investing in infrastructure, political stability, and healthcare.
With more people living in the country, the competition intensifies for scarce employment opportunities as well as housing and food, leading to countries prone to social instability and upheaval. In other words, there is no way out of the current strategies, and without adaptive intention, that is the true story that cannot be hidden. If you view in the short term, there could be potential economic growth and productivity. However, this is now deteriorating as a continuing issue that started in the 20th century after World War II as soon as medical advancements and industrial agriculture spurred unprecedented population growth until now as people no longer adhere to safe ethics. A study from the Wide Fund for Nature organisation announced that it was exacerbating resource scarcity and environmental degradation. As everyone is aware, water covers 70% of the Earth. Remarkably, only 3% of the Earth’s fresh water remains, and two-thirds of that is away in glaciers or otherwise inaccessible for human use. It is estimated that around 1.1 billion people worldwide lack access to water, and up to 2.7 billion experience severe scarcity for at “least one month of the year.” Therefore, overpopulation is considered a critical threat to humanity, and it is imperative that we find urgent solutions to manage it effectively.
Solution and call to action/ conclusion
In the current situation, with modern skills and technology, it is impossible for our planet to encounter the consequences. Based on the statistics and trend of carbon dioxide, which determines our life cycle, this raises awareness of the call to action. To reduce the impact or prevent the consequences, implement resource management, invest in renewable energy, build high-density buildings, promote environmental awareness, and explore how enhanced government policies and education programmes can further empower comprehensive family resources and easier access to contraceptives. Focus on sustainable agriculture practices such as long-lasting crop collection, lab-grown resources, and “water-efficient irrigation” techniques that mitigates the impact on ecosystems. Turning back from social unrest
Conclusion
Thanks again for the invitation to the Walkley Awards for this once-in-a-lifetime opportunity to give information face-to-face about the potential threats and future consequences that will control 8 billion people's lives. Population is the number of individuals living together on this planet. Population, the aggregate of the individuals sharing this planet, encapsulates our ultimate goal of harmonious coexistence and safeguarding our beloved Earth.
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**Structure and Coherence (5/5):**
The speech is well-organized, clearly moving from introduction to body to conclusion. There is a logical flow to the information provided, with each section building on the last. This coherence helps in delivering a persuasive and impactful message.
**Content and Relevance (5/5):**
The content is highly relevant to current global issues. It includes not just the problems of overpopulation but also addresses the consequences and potential solutions. The incorporation of statistics and references to studies adds credibility and relevance to the discussion.
**Argument and Persuasiveness (5/5):**
The speech presents a strong argument concerning the urgency of addressing overpopulation. The use of quotes, future projections, and vivid descriptions of the consequences create a compelling case for action. The call to action in the conclusion further reinforces the persuasive nature of the speech.
**Use of Language (4/5):**
The language is formal and appropriate for an awards ceremony, with some powerful imagery used to great effect. However, there are a few instances where the sentence structure is a bit complex, which may impact readability. The speech may benefit from some simplification of language to ensure clarity and stronger engagement with the audience.
**Research and Evidence (4/5):**
The speech is grounded in research, with mention of specific studies and factual information. However, some claims (like John Wilmoth’s attribution regarding CO2 emissions) might need a proper citation or source for validation. This ensures the audience can trust the information being presented.
**Overall Rating: 23/25**
The speech accomplishes its purpose of raising awareness about overpopulation in an effective and structured way. While it might benefit from some simplifications in language and clearer references for some of the claims and data presented, it stands as a strong piece of journalism and a commendable address for an awards ceremony.
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