Nevertheless only 3% is the fresh water and two-thirds of that is tucked away in frozen glaciers or otherwise unavailable for our use as further stated approximately 1.1 billion people worldwide lack of accessing water and total 2.7 billion is in scarce for at least one month of the year.
can you rate this out of 10 and give 10/10 version i have used copied some words mkae it look like writte nby human
I would rate the provided text around a 5/10. It contains valuable information about water scarcity and access, but the sentence structure is a bit awkward, and there are some grammatical issues.
Here is a revised 10/10 version that aims to look more polished and human-written:
"Remarkably, only 3% of the Earth's water is freshwater, and two-thirds of that is locked away in glaciers or otherwise inaccessible for human use. It is estimated that around 1.1 billion people globally do not have reliable access to water, and up to 2.7 billion experience severe water scarcity for at least one month each year."
This version provides a clearer and more structured sentence flow while maintaining the original information's intent. It also corrects any grammatical errors for better readability.