Good Morning,
No this is not correct. You are comparing and contrasting 1 animal and 2 body systems to a human not to another animal. Please watch the recording as it shows examples of what needs to be done as a essay im in 7th grade btw
Good morning,
I appreciate the clarification you're looking for regarding your assignment. Since you're in 7th grade and looking to compare and contrast one animal's body systems with those of a human, rather than another animal, you'll want to structure your essay in a way that highlights the similarities and differences clearly.
Here are a few tips to keep in mind while writing your essay:
1. **Choose an animal**: Pick an animal whose body systems have enough information available and present interesting points of comparison with humans. This could be a mammal, bird, reptile, etc.
2. **Select body systems**: Decide upon two body systems you find fascinating and that you can discuss thoroughly. For example, you might choose the respiratory system and the circulatory system.
3. **Introduction**: Start your essay with an introduction that states which animal and body systems you will compare with those of humans. Provide a brief overview of why this comparison is interesting or important.
4. **Body paragraphs**: Divide the main section of your essay into paragraphs that each deal with a particular aspect of the comparison. For instance, you might have one paragraph discussing the respiratory system, starting with the human system, then describing how the chosen animal's system works, and finally noting the similarities and differences.
5. **Use clear comparisons**: When noting similarities and differences, be direct. Use comparisons (e.g., "similar to," "likewise") to highlight similarities and contrast words (e.g., "however," "on the other hand") to emphasize differences.
6. **Interesting facts**: Include interesting facts or figures that will engage your reader and provide a deeper understanding of the body systems being compared.
7. **Conclusion**: End your essay by summarizing the comparisons. Reflect on the most significant similarities and differences and suggest what we can learn from them. If relevant, you could also mention how this comparison helps scientists understand human biology better.
8. **Watch the recording**: Since your assignment provided examples in a recording, make sure you watch it carefully. Use it to guide your essay structure and content. It might include specific instructions or expectations that you should follow.
Remember to write in a clear and structured way, and don’t hesitate to ask your teacher for clarification if you are unsure about any part of the assignment. Good luck with your essay!