Dear Editor, I am writing because your article on the new school cafeteria was horrible and your reporter doesn't know anything. The article said that the new cafeteria will be a waste of money, and it is wrong. Our cafeteria doesn't have enough room, it smells bad, the walls are dirty, and it takes too long to get through the line. How do you expect us to learn when our lunches are gross? You need to correct your article and send your reporter to interview people who really matter, like me! Sincerely, Karrina Sweet Revise the letter in 3–5 sentences so that it uses precise language that is appropriate for the domain.
Dear Editor, I am writing to express my disappointment with your recent article on the new school cafeteria. The article's claim that the cafeteria is a waste of money is completely unfounded. Our current cafeteria suffers from serious issues including limited space, unpleasant odors, unsanitary walls, and long wait times. These conditions greatly impact our ability to focus on our studies. I urge you to rectify this by assigning your reporter to interview concerned students like myself who have a firsthand understanding of the matter. Sincerely, Karrina Sweet
