make this more formal
Dear Coach Spinnato,
Thank you for your email I am very interested in trying out for the football team. I will put my heart out on the pitch and use every ounce of power to strive for greatness. I also think that I could add a lot to the team and not only make myself better but also make my teammates better.
Dear Coach Spinnato,
I sincerely appreciate your email and would like to express my keen interest in attempting the football team's tryouts. I am fully committed to giving my utmost dedication and utilizing every bit of my strength to pursue excellence. Additionally, I firmly believe that my contributions to the team will not only enhance my own abilities but also uplift the performance of my fellow teammates.
Thank you once again for your consideration.
Best regards,
[Your Name]