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My name is Bryant Parker, I live in conyers, GA with my two sisters and my parents. I enjoy being outside, riding my bike, and going swimming. However, my favorite thing to do outside is fishing. The reason I choose this topic is because I genuinely like going fishing. It is peaceful and relaxing for me. It calms me down whenever I toss my line. All I hear is the water fall. Whenever I catch a fish, it reminds me of a peaceful life, just sitting there and staring at the creek. Catching a fish to me makes it exciting and fun whenever I go fishing.

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My name is Bryant Parker, and I live in Conyers, GA with my two sisters and parents. I enjoy being outside, riding my bike, and going swimming. However, my favorite outdoor activity is fishing. I chose this topic because I genuinely like it. Fishing is peaceful and relaxing for me. Whenever I toss my line, all I hear is the gentle sound of the water fall. Catching a fish adds excitement and fun to my fishing trips, reminding me of the peaceful moments spent by the creek, just sitting there and staring at the water.