English 101

A question of faulty parallelism
1)) Activities on Wednesday afternoons include fishing trips, dance lessons, and computers.
2)) Hannah told her rock climbing partner that she bought a new harness and of her desire to climb Otter Cliffs.



Did you read through the webpage at the link I sent you before? Ones similar to these are in there.

The problem in the first one is in the series.

The problem in the second one is after the word "that."

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