Dear Editor,
I am writing because your article on the new school cafeteria was horrible and your reporter doesn't know anything. The article said that the new cafeteria will be a waste of money, and it is wrong. Our cafeteria doesn't have enough room, it smells bad, the walls are dirty, and it takes too long to get through the line. How do you expect us to learn when our lunches are gross? You need to correct your article and send your reporter to interview people who really matter, like me!
Sincerely,
Karrina Sweet
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Dear Editor,
I am writing to express my disappointment with the recent article on the new school cafeteria. The article dismisses the urgent need for an upgraded cafeteria, failing to address the lack of space, unpleasant odors, dirty walls, and lengthy wait times. These substandard conditions heavily impact our ability to focus and learn. I kindly request that you revisit the article, giving it the attention it deserves by interviewing students and taking their experiences into account.
Sincerely,
Karrina Sweet
Dear Editor,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the recent article on the new school cafeteria. The article failed to acknowledge the dire conditions of our current cafeteria, such as limited space, unpleasant odors, dirty walls, and long wait times. These issues directly impact our ability to focus and learn. It would be greatly appreciated if you could rectify the article and conduct interviews with individuals who truly understand the significance of this matter, including myself.
Yours sincerely,
Karrina Sweet
Dear Editor,
I am writing to express my disappointment with your article about the new school cafeteria. The article failed to accurately address the pressing issues with our current cafeteria, such as limited space, unpleasant odors, dirty walls, and lengthy wait times. These conditions hinder our ability to focus on academics and necessitate improvements. I urge you to revise the article and conduct interviews with students to obtain firsthand accounts.
Sincerely,
Karrina Sweet