Throughout the day, they played in the spacious halls of the palace, which had living flowers growing out of the walls. Opening the large amber windows the Grandmother allowed the fishes to swim, into the palace and nibble from the mermaids hand.
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1 usage
Throughout the day, they played in the spacious halls of the palace which had living flowers growing out of the walls. Opening the large, amber windows, the Grandmother allowed the fishes to swim into the palace and nibble from the mermaid's hand.
Throughout the day, they played in the spacious halls of the palace, which had living flowers growing out of the walls. Opening the large, amber windows, the grandmother allowed the fishes to swim into the palace and nibble from the mermaid's hand.
Fix It:
1. Capital: Capitalize "Grandmother" to "grandmother" since it is not a proper noun.
2. Commas: Add commas after "large" and before "amber" to separate the adjective clause.
3. Apostrophe: Add an apostrophe after "mermaid" to show possession.
4. Usage: Remove the unnecessary word "into" before "the palace" to improve sentence clarity.