Today you will submit two items: your thesis statement and your essay plan. You do NOT need to submit a completed essay. Your plan might take the form of an outline, a concept map, or the provided graphic organizer (see Lesson Intro page resources). This outline/plan should be created on a separate document. Be sure to include all requirements (below).
Type your thesis statement here. (You will upload your outline/plan in item 2.)
When you are done writing, ask yourself:
Did I include a clear, effective thesis statement? (2 points)
Does my thesis statement share the main focus of my essay? (2 points)
Did I use appropriate punctuation and capitalization? (2 points)
Thesis Statement: The legalization of marijuana can have significant economic benefits for the United States through increased tax revenue, job creation, and reduced enforcement costs.
Evaluation:
1. Yes, the thesis statement is clear and effective in conveying the main argument of the essay.
2. The thesis statement shares the main focus of the essay, which is the economic benefits of legalizing marijuana.
3. The punctuation and capitalization in the thesis statement are appropriate.
Thesis Statement: The advancements in technology have greatly impacted the way people communicate and interact with each other, leading to both positive and negative effects on society.
As an AI language model, I am unable to evaluate or proofread your specific work as I don't have access to the content you are referring to. However, I can guide you on how to ensure that your thesis statement meets the given requirements.
1. Clear and Effective Thesis Statement:
To ensure that your thesis statement is clear and effective, consider the following points:
- Ensure it is concise: Your thesis statement should be a single sentence that clearly expresses the main point or argument of your essay.
- Make it specific: Your thesis statement should not be vague or general. It should clearly state what your essay will focus on.
- Avoid complex language: Use clear and understandable language to convey your main idea.
- Make it arguable: A strong thesis statement is one that allows for debate and discussion. Avoid stating facts or obvious statements.
2. Sharing the Main Focus of your Essay:
Your thesis statement should accurately reflect the main focus of your essay. Ensure that it provides an overview of the topics or arguments you will address in your essay.
3. Appropriate Punctuation and Capitalization:
While I cannot see your specific thesis statement, make sure that you review your work to ensure correct punctuation and capitalization. Check for proper use of capital letters at the beginning of sentences and for proper placement of punctuation marks such as commas, periods, and question marks.
To ensure accuracy, double-check this information within the specific guidelines provided by your instructor or the resource you are using.
Remember, an effective thesis statement clearly and concisely summarizes the main focus of your essay and presents an arguable point of view.