The teacher asks Ana to revise her conclusion because it states a new fact instead of summing up her essay. Ana really wants to include the fact. What can she do?(1 point)
Responses
Write a longer conclusion, and start with the new fact.
Write a longer conclusion, and start with the new fact.
Turn the paper in again with no changes.
Turn the paper in again with no changes.
Rewrite the paper from scratch.
Rewrite the paper from scratch.
Add the fact to a body paragraph, then update the conclusion if needed.
Add the fact to a body paragraph, then update the conclusion if needed.
Ana can add the fact to a body paragraph, and then update the conclusion if needed.
In order for Ana to revise her conclusion without including the new fact, she can follow these steps:
1. Add the fact to a body paragraph: Begin by identifying the most relevant body paragraph where the new fact can be integrated. Make sure that it flows seamlessly within the existing content.
2. Evaluate the revised body paragraph: Review the body paragraph to ensure that the new fact is effectively integrated and does not disrupt the flow or coherence of the essay. Make any necessary adjustments or rephrasing to ensure clarity and coherence.
3. Update the conclusion if needed: Once the new fact has been incorporated into a body paragraph, revisit the conclusion to determine whether it still effectively summarizes the overall argument or main points of the essay. If the new fact significantly changes the direction or focus of the essay, revise the conclusion accordingly.
By following these steps, Ana can include the new fact without violating the teacher's request to revise the conclusion to only sum up her essay.