The teacher asks Ana to revise her conclusion because it states a new fact instead of summing up her essay. Ana really wants to include the fact. What can she do?(1 point)
Responses
Rewrite the paper from scratch.
Rewrite the paper from scratch.
Turn the paper in again with no changes.
Turn the paper in again with no changes.
Add the fact to a body paragraph, then update the conclusion if needed.
Add the fact to a body paragraph, then update the conclusion if needed.
Write a longer conclusion, and start with the new fact.
Write a longer conclusion, and start with the new fact.
Add the fact to a body paragraph, then update the conclusion if needed.
Add the fact to a body paragraph, then update the conclusion if needed.
The correct answer is to "Add the fact to a body paragraph, then update the conclusion if needed."
To explain, the teacher is asking Ana to revise her conclusion because it should serve the purpose of summarizing her essay rather than introducing new information. However, Ana still wants to include the fact she wants to share.
Instead of starting the conclusion with this new fact, Ana can incorporate it into a relevant body paragraph. She should find a suitable place within the essay where the fact can support her argument or provide additional evidence. Once the fact is added, Ana should assess whether the conclusion needs to be modified to ensure it accurately summarizes all the points made in the essay. If necessary, she can update the conclusion to reflect the information she added in the body paragraph.
By following this approach, Ana can include the desired fact without violating the teacher's request to revise the conclusion.