Revise the following paragraph for correct pronoun agreement.Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing up the balloons, her least favorite task. They hate
how the balloons have to be completely full or it won't float. On the other side of the gym, Sam is practicing the cheer routine
If she doesn't practice, you could embarrass yourself. The last to arrive are Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As
long as everyone does her part, the pep rally will be a success.
Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing up the balloons, their least favorite task. They hate how the balloons have to be completely full or they won't float. On the other side of the gym, Sam is practicing the cheer routine. If she doesn't practice, she could embarrass herself. The last to arrive are Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone does their part, the pep rally will be a success.
Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing up the balloons, their least favorite task. They hate how the balloons have to be completely full or they won't float. On the other side of the gym, Sam is practicing the cheer routine. If she doesn't practice, she could embarrass herself. The last to arrive are Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone does their part, the pep rally will be a success.
Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing up the balloons, their least favorite task. They hate how the balloons have to be completely full or they won't float. On the other side of the gym, Sam is practicing the cheer routine. If she doesn't practice, she could embarrass herself. The last to arrive are Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone does their part, the pep rally will be a success.
Explanation:
To revise the paragraph for correct pronoun agreement, we need to ensure that the pronouns match with the nouns they are referring to in terms of number and gender.
In the original paragraph, the pronoun "her" is used to refer to the collective noun "Katie and Jill." Since "Katie and Jill" is plural, the pronoun should be "their" instead of "her."
Similarly, the pronoun "she" is used to refer to "Sam" and "you" later on. In both cases, "she" should be replaced with "she" and "you" respectively to maintain consistency.
Lastly, the pronoun "her" is used to refer to "everyone," but since "everyone" is also a collective noun, the pronoun should be "their" instead of "her."
By making these revisions, the paragraph now maintains proper pronoun agreement.