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Paragraph 1) American Status Law: Basically, when you leave your country to become a fullblown citizen of the United States, you renounce your previous Country. You will no longer represent them anymore as you’re now American, should this be a law? No, it doesn’t have to be, but if you’re going to stay in America, you should at the very least represent it.

Paragraph 1) American Status Law: Basically, when you leave your country to become a full-blown citizen of the United States, you renounce your previous country. You will no longer represent them anymore as you’re now American. Should this be a law? No, it doesn’t have to be, but if you’re going to stay in America, you should, at the very least, represent it.

Paragraph 2) One Flag Law: This is as it sounds, no? When in America you do not wave any other flag, but the American flag. The flag that represents ALL peoples and their freedoms. That this flag should represent their religion as well as their race, gender, culture, and so on. The U.S. Flag is the only flag they should ever use because it does everything they could ever ask for. (And also, I really want to see the flag used for its intended purpose that it seems a lot of people have forgotten about…)

Paragraph 2) One Flag Law: This is as it sounds, right? When in America, you do not wave any other flag but the American flag. The flag that represents all people and their freedoms. This flag should represent their religion as well as their race, gender, culture, and so on. The U.S. Flag is the only flag they should ever use because it fulfills all their needs. (And also, I really want to see the flag used for its intended purpose, which seems to have been forgotten by many people...)

Paragraph 3) This to me out of the three is a true law in the sense that it binds people. True-Liberalism Law tells its citizens to not enforce ANY beliefs onto anyone! The law dictates that you may create an institution, but you’re not permitted to indoctrinate people forcibly. This law covers all bases for any sort of belief besides the moral laws that govern the United States.

And if your belief is found to be harmful, then you will be exiled from the United States.

Paragraph 3) Out of the three, this is the true law that binds people. The True-Liberalism Law instructs its citizens not to impose any beliefs on others. It dictates that while you can establish an institution, you are not allowed to forcefully indoctrinate people. This law encompasses all beliefs except for those that violate the moral principles governing the United States. Moreover, if your belief is deemed harmful, you will be expelled from the United States.

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