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Finally, they reached the palace, an opulent structure adorned with gold and jewels. The guards at the entrance did not recognize Victory, and his young companion as an archer from this city.
Orders from king Fadamier, no one knight, archer, or servant is a loud in with out his paper stating him so. Spoke a dark haired man, with a full bearded.
Victory Laughed as he swung down from his horse. That sounds memorized he replied. Well he he said handing him a paper.
The man took the paper, and nodded towards Lomer. Lomer reached in to his satchel and took out a paper as well.
The guard inspected the papers carefully, verifying their authenticity. Ah so you are the youngest son of General Hondo, Victory well I now know your reason for coming here.
Victory nodded, relieved that their true identities had been recognized. "Yes, that is correct," he replied respectfully. "My father, General Hondo, my brother Lender wrote me telling me Hondo is dying.
Yes, yes that is true, but first the two of you need to follow me replied the dark haired man.
Victory, and Lomer looked at each other and followed him.
They followed him under the gate way, and the made a sudden right hand turn, and followed him up some steps built in to the side of the palace wall.
Victory suddenly knew where they where going, as they reached the top the man shouted Victor, Victor, someone of great importance to you is here.
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Certainly! As the dark-haired man called out for Victor, Victory's heart raced with anticipation. Who could be waiting for him at the top of the palace steps? With each step he took, his mind raced with possibilities.
Finally, they reached the top of the steps, and standing there was a figure wrapped in a luxurious robe, their identity obscured. The figure turned towards them, revealing the face of a wise and weathered old man. It was King Fadamier himself.
"I have been informed of your arrival, Victory," the king spoke with a commanding yet kind voice. "Your father, General Hondo, has served this kingdom with honor and loyalty. I mourn the news of his declining health."
Victory bowed respectfully before the king. "Your Majesty, thank you for your kind words. I have come as swiftly as I could upon receiving my brother's letter. Please, tell me, how is my father?"
The king's expression softened as he placed a hand on Victory's shoulder. "Your father's condition is grave, but he maintains his fighting spirit. He has always been a staunch protector of this kingdom, and it is his wish to see you before his time comes."
Victory's heart sank, realizing the urgency of the situation. "I must see him immediately, Your Majesty. Please, guide me to him."
The king nodded and motioned for Victory and Lomer to follow him. They walked through opulent hallways adorned with intricate tapestries and ornate chandeliers. The palace was a breathtaking display of wealth and power.
Finally, they arrived at a grand chamber guarded by several soldiers. The king signaled for them to step aside, granting Victory and Lomer access. The door creaked open, revealing General Hondo lying on a grand bed, weak but determined, with his family surrounding him.
Victory rushed to his father's side, tears welling up in his eyes. "Father," he spoke softly, his voice choked with emotion. "I am here."
General Hondo managed a weak smile, his voice feeble but filled with love. "Victory, my son. I am proud of you. It brings me comfort to see you by my side in my final days. Remember, serve this kingdom with honor."
With tears streaming down his face, Victory nodded, clutching his father's hand tightly. "I promise, Father. I will make you proud."
As the hours passed, Victory and his family remained by General Hondo's side, sharing stories, laughter, and tears. In those moments, they reaffirmed the unbreakable bond that held them together.
And so, the journey that began at the palace gates led Victory to his father's bedside, where he would find strength, guidance, and the determination to carry on his father's legacy.
Finally, they reached the palace, an opulent structure adorned with gold and jewels. The guards at the entrance did not recognize Victory, and his young companion as an archer from this city.
Orders from king Fadamier, no one knight, archer, or servant is a loud in with out his paper stating him so. Spoke a dark haired man, with a full bearded.
Victory Laughed as he swung down from his horse. That sounds memorized he replied. Well he he said handing him a paper.
The man took the paper, and nodded towards Lomer. Lomer reached in to his satchel and took out a paper as well.
The guard inspected the papers carefully, verifying their authenticity. Ah so you are the youngest son of General Hondo, Victory well I now know your reason for coming here.
Victory nodded, relieved that their true identities had been recognized. "Yes, that is correct," he replied respectfully. "My father, General Hondo, my brother Lender wrote me telling me Hondo is dying.
Yes, yes that is true, but first the two of you need to follow me replied the dark haired man.
Victory, and Lomer looked at each other and followed him.
They followed him under the gate way, and the made a sudden right hand turn, and followed him up some steps built in to the side of the palace wall.
Victory suddenly knew where they where going, as they reached the top the man shouted Victor, Victor, someone of great importance to you is here.
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Finally, they reached the palace, an opulent structure adorned with gold and jewels. The guards at the entrance did not recognize Victory and his young companion as archers from this city.
"Orders from King Fadamier," spoke a dark-haired man with a full beard. "No knight, archer, or servant is allowed in without proper documentation."
Victory laughed as he swung down from his horse. "That sounds memorized," he replied. "Well, here," he said, handing him a paper.
The man took the paper and nodded towards Lomer. Lomer reached into his satchel and took out a paper as well.
The guard inspected the papers carefully, verifying their authenticity. "Ah, so you are the youngest son of General Hondo, Victory. Well, now I know your reason for coming here."
Victory nodded, relieved that their true identities had been recognized. "Yes, that is correct," he replied respectfully. "My father, General Hondo, my brother Lender, wrote to me, telling me that Hondo is dying."
"Yes, yes, that is true," said the dark-haired man. "But first, the two of you need to follow me."
Victory and Lomer looked at each other and followed him. They moved under the gateway and made a sudden right-hand turn, following him up some steps built into the side of the palace wall.
Victory suddenly knew where they were going as they reached the top. The man shouted, "Victor, Victor! Someone of great importance to you is here."
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Finally, they arrived at the magnificent palace. Its grandeur was breathtaking, with its soaring towers and shimmering golden decorations. However, as Victory and his young companion approached the entrance, the guards eyed them with suspicion, clearly unfamiliar with their presence.
"State your purpose," demanded a gruff guard, his voice dripping with authority.
Victory dismounted his horse gracefully, a mischievous glint in his eyes. "Ah, my good sir," he said with a smirk. "Surely you've heard of me? I am Victory, renowned archer of these lands, and I've come bearing urgent news for King Fadamier."
The guard raised an eyebrow skeptically. "Orders from the king are strict, no entry without proper documentation," he asserted firmly.
With a chuckle, Victory reached into his satchel and presented a small pouch to the guard. "I thought you might say that," Victory stated, his voice brimming with confidence. "In this pouch, you will find a letter sealed with the royal insignia. It reveals my true identity and purpose. I suggest you take a look."
Curiosity piqued, the guard reluctantly took the pouch and examined its contents. Opening the letter, his eyes widened as he read the words written by King Fadamier himself. Genuine surprise flashed across his face.
"Apologies, Sir Victory," the guard said, now more respectful. "I didn't recognize you at first. It seems that the king indeed awaits your presence."
Victory nodded, satisfied with the guard's change of tone. "Very well, but don't forget my loyal companion, Lomer," he reminded the guard.
Lomer stepped forward, producing his own letter from the depths of his satchel. As the guard inspected their documents closely, Victory couldn't help but exchange a knowing glance with Lomer. Their plan had worked.
The guard lifted his gaze, now filled with acknowledgment. "Ah, so you are the youngest son of General Hondo, Victory," he acknowledged, his voice carrying a tinge of respect. "I now understand the urgency and importance behind your visit."
Relief washed over Victory as he acknowledged the guard's recognition. "Yes, that is correct," he replied, gratitude evident in his voice. "My father, General Hondo, lies on his deathbed, and I must see him before his time runs out."
The guard nodded sympathetically. "Understood. However, before you meet with your father, there is someone of great importance waiting for you," he revealed cryptically.
Intrigue filled Victory's heart as he exchanged another glance with Lomer. Who could be of such importance to him at this critical moment? With newfound determination, they followed the guard, their minds brimming with curiosity and anticipation, ready to uncover the mysterious connection that awaited them within the palace's splendid walls.
Finally, they reached the palace, an opulent structure adorned with gold and jewels. The guards at the entrance did not recognize Victory and his young companion as archers from this city.
"Orders from King Fadamier," spoke a dark-haired man with a full beard. "No knight, archer, or servant is allowed in without proper documentation."
Victory laughed as he swung down from his horse. "That sounds memorized," he replied. "Well, here," he said, handing him a paper.
The man took the paper and nodded towards Lomer. Lomer reached into his satchel and took out a paper as well.
The guard inspected the papers carefully, verifying their authenticity. "Ah, so you are the youngest son of General Hondo, Victory. Well, now I know your reason for coming here."
Victory nodded, relieved that their true identities had been recognized. "Yes, that is correct," he replied respectfully. "My father, General Hondo, my brother Lender, wrote to me, telling me that Hondo is dying."
"Yes, yes, that is true," said the dark-haired man. "But first, the two of you need to follow me."
Victory and Lomer looked at each other and followed him. They moved under the gateway and made a sudden right-hand turn, following him up some steps built into the side of the palace wall.
Victory suddenly knew where they were going as they reached the top. The man shouted, "Victor, Victor! Someone of great importance to you is here."
They waited a minute or two before a fairly tall figure approached, non less then the gate lord Victor.
Victor hesitated a minute then in braced Victory. Saying
It has been a long time to make it exact I have not seen you brother since you were injured.