In the morning, I like to take a walk in the park. correct the sentence

In the morning, I like taking a walk in the park.

Upon entering the room the detective noticed several possible clues.

corrected sentence

Upon entering the room, the detective noticed several potential clues.

I did extra chores all week long for I wanted to get a later curfew over the weekend. corrected sentence

I did extra chores all week long because I wanted to get a later curfew over the weekend.

My favorite types of movies are comedies action and suspense. corrected sentence

My favorite types of movies are comedies, action, and suspense.

Many people enjoy baseball the great American pastime.corrected sentence

Many people enjoy baseball, the great American pastime.

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