Select the sentences that contain extra words and could be written more concisely.
Select 4.
Responses
A I would like to begin my performance by singing a song that is called "The Beat Goes On".I would like to begin my performance by singing a song that is called "The Beat Goes On" .
B Over the weekend, my football team won our scrimmage, which improved our overall record to 8-1.Over the weekend, my football team won our scrimmage, which improved our overall record to 8-1.
C The old rusty lawnmower was covered with dirt, and many of the parts were rusty.The old rusty lawnmower was covered with dirt, and many of the parts were rusty.
D I sent an email, and the email said that I had not received your product yet.I sent an email, and the email said that I had not received your product yet.
E Of all the living creatures, whales are the largest animals on earth.Of all the living creatures, whales are the largest animals on earth.
F Life jackets are essential when swimming in the ocean.Life jackets are essential when swimming in the ocean.
G My mother is a packrat, keeps everything, and throws nothing away.