How could the organization of the passage be improved?
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It needs to explain where the external boxes were sold.
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There should be no mention of television remotes.
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What closed captioning is should be explained earlier.
The organization of the passage could be improved by explaining what closed captioning is earlier in the text.
To improve the organization of the passage, the following steps can be taken:
1. Start the passage by explaining what closed captioning is, providing a clear definition for readers.
2. Then, introduce the external boxes that were sold for closed captioning purposes.
3. Explain where these external boxes were sold, addressing the location or platform where they were available.
4. Avoid mentioning television remotes unless relevant to the discussion or necessary for understanding the topic.
5. Ensure that any necessary explanation or clarification, such as the purpose of closed captioning, is provided earlier in the passage for better reader comprehension.