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In Australian law, the negligence is a “failure to behave” with reasonable care, that causes harm to a person or loss due to the action, such as in medical, sports, council property, or the workplace (Encyclopedia-Britannica, 2023). The Civil Liability Act 2003 (QLD) encompasses a range of provisions, and one of the most significant aspects is medical negligence, which falls under the purview of the act in Chapter 2, Division 5. The Civil Liability Act 2003 (QLD) is an act that “reforms the law of civil liability for negligent acts, and or other purposes.” (Taylors Solicitors) However, the current act has failed to provide equitable outcomes for relevant stakeholders, since it has failed to thoroughly consider the perspectives of both doctors and patients. Medical negligence occurs when a medical practitioner deviates from the accepted standard of care and causes long-term complications for their patients, subjecting them to exact legal repercussions. This law emphasises, the need for doctors to take full responsibility for their own actions. Recently, many plaintiffs have attempted to sue the healthcare professionals responsible for the medical procedures, leading to an increase in the number of people coming ahead to seek compensation for permanent injuries. To adequately address this issue, arguments will be presented from the perspectives of two main relevant stakeholders, the patients and the doctors, followed by a recommendation that would improve the present law and protect the stakeholders within the framework of the law.
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In Australian law, negligence is a "failure to behave" with reasonable care that causes harm to a person or loss due to actions, such as in medical, sports, council property, or the workplace (Encyclopedia-Britannica, 2023). The Civil Liability Act 2003 (QLD) encompasses a range of provisions, and one of the most significant aspects is medical negligence, which falls under the purview of the act in Chapter 2, Division 5. The Civil Liability Act 2003 (QLD) is an act that "reforms the law of civil liability for negligent acts, and for other purposes" (Taylors Solicitors). However, the current act has failed to provide equitable outcomes for relevant stakeholders since it has failed to thoroughly consider the perspectives of both doctors and patients. Medical negligence occurs when a medical practitioner deviates from the accepted standard of care and causes long-term complications for their patients, subjecting them to exact legal repercussions. This law emphasizes the need for doctors to take full responsibility for their own actions. Recently, many plaintiffs have attempted to sue the healthcare professionals responsible for the medical procedures, leading to an increase in the number of people coming forward to seek compensation for permanent injuries. To adequately address this issue, arguments will be presented from the perspectives of two main relevant stakeholders: the patients and the doctors, followed by a recommendation that would improve the present law and protect the stakeholders within the framework of the law.
There are some minor grammatical and punctuation errors in the paragraph. Here is the corrected version:
In Australian law, negligence is a "failure to behave" with reasonable care that causes harm to a person or loss due to action, such as in medical, sports, council property, or the workplace (Encyclopedia Britannica, 2023). The Civil Liability Act 2003 (QLD) encompasses a range of provisions, and one of the most significant aspects is medical negligence, which falls under the purview of the act in Chapter 2, Division 5. The Civil Liability Act 2003 (QLD) is an act that "reforms the law of civil liability for negligent acts, and for other purposes" (Taylor's Solicitors). However, the current act has failed to provide equitable outcomes for relevant stakeholders since it has failed to thoroughly consider the perspectives of both doctors and patients. Medical negligence occurs when a medical practitioner deviates from the accepted standard of care and causes long-term complications for their patients, subjecting them to exact legal repercussions. This law emphasizes the need for doctors to take full responsibility for their own actions. Recently, many plaintiffs have attempted to sue the healthcare professionals responsible for the medical procedures, leading to an increase in the number of people coming forward to seek compensation for permanent injuries. To adequately address this issue, arguments will be presented from the perspectives of two main relevant stakeholders: the patients and the doctors, followed by a recommendation that would improve the present law and protect the stakeholders within the framework of the law.