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What do you notice about the organization and structure of the paragraph?
Some Egyptian pharaohs had huge statues of themselves made. They also had their people build great tombs for them. When the pharaohs died, their bodies were placed in the tombs. Jewelry, food, clothing—all the pharaohs’ favorite things—also went into the tombs. The Egyptian pharaohs knew these statues and tombs would let people know how important they were.
There is no topic sentence.
The main idea is not expressed in the topic sentence.
The supporting details are not in a clear order.
Nothing is wrong.