could visualize the scene where Clay uses his ax help him climb. The text describes Clay's actions in detail. London includes important details such as how Clay brushes the snow away and chops a shallow place for his foot. He describes how Clay take a step, reaches forward, and repeats this to climb. Descriptions like "a tiny speck of toiling life poised like a fly on the face of Moosehide Mountain" allowed me to visualize how slow and tedious this process would be on a large mountain. In "Up the Slide" by Jack London
Self-Evaluation
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