Sorry if this is a random question, but does this slogan for jeans sound okay? Does anyone have any suggestions?
" Sweet denim,
even better hemmin' "
Thanks
well, it rhymes, so that makes it catchy
But I have no idea what it means that will help it sell.
I suspect most people these days don't do their own sewing, so unless you're marketing to industrial clothing manufacturers, who will care how much fun it is to hem?