Please help me check, and DON'T COPY< YOU WILL GET CAUGHT, I know from past experience
In four to five sentences, summarize an important day in your life. Use at least one simple sentence, one compound sentence, one complex sentence, and one compound-complex sentence in your writing.(4 points)
My answer:
My ears are going to get pierced. I am so excited, but I am also a little scared. I let go off my mom's hand, which took a lot of courage. I sit on the chair and waited for my ears to get pierced, and I felt like an adult!
My ears are going to get pierced.
why the passive voice? Makes me think you have no say in the matter.
You also mix up a lot of present and past tense. Stick to one or the other.
Is this alright?
I went to the bookstore! My friend and I went to the bookstore. I didn't know what to buy, so my friend gave me a book. After walking around for a bit longer, we decided to check out. Although we spent more than planned, we were overjoyed, and enjoyed our outing very much.
heres my answer
I am going to swim on my own today. My big sister is trailing behind me. I'm pretty confident, but a little scared. After I let go of my sisters shoulders, which I was clinging onto like a koala. I plunge into the water and immediately start swimming like my life depended on it. (side note: this sounds like it happened years ago but in actuality it happened last week)