So I'm writing my conclusion for my essay and I don't know what else to write. It's about one place in the world we'd like to visit and I picked Finland. My thesis is: "The bountiful nature, the winter activities, and the charming architecture compelled me to tour the Land of the Thousand Lakes."
This is what I have in my conclusion so far: "As a result of, I will be overwhelmed with joy after traveling the brilliant nature, opening my eyes to the wonderful cities, and reindeer sleighing. The natural scenery filled with breathtaking tarns is a sight for sore eyes. Visiting the ponds presently is important, because reports of pollution in the icy cool waters of Finland are rising. Which leads me to believe that visiting now before later is more important than ever."
Can you please give me ideas to expand on for my essay??
"The bountiful nature, the winter activities, and the charming architecture compelled me to tour the Land of the Thousand Lakes!"
Why did these things Convince you to want to travel to The Land Of The Thousand Lakes?
What is so charming about the architecture?
What about the winter activities compelled you to wan to travel to The Land Of The Thousand Lakes?
What is so great about the nature in The Land Of The Thousand Lakes?