Rewrite the paragraph so that all subjects and verbs agree.
The PTA agree to fund a fall field trip. The seventh-grade class vote on the destination. Some votes for the zoo, others vote for the museum. After the vote, the student council announces that the zoo is the winner. (2 points)
Revise the following paragraph for correct pronoun agreement.
Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing up the balloons, her least favorite task. They hate how the balloons have to be completely full or it won't float. On the other side of the gym, Sam is practicing the cheer routine. If she doesn't practice, you could embarrass yourself. The last to arrive are Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone does her part, the pep rally will be a success. (2 points)
The relative pronoun "that" is used with an essential clause and the relative pronoun "which" is used with a nonessential clause. In three to five sentences, explain when to use each pronoun and the difference between the two relative clauses. (2 points)
Rewrite the following paragraph, replacing commas with semicolons where they are needed.
This summer, a popular sandwich shop called Mark’s Deli will be opening downtown. The deli will offer free tastings of their most popular sandwiches on Friday, May 10, Saturday, May 11, and Sunday, May 12. The samples will include mouth-watering bites of the Veggie Deluxe, a wrap with roasted vegetables and hummus, the Italian Combo, a selection of Italian meats and cheeses on a roll, and the famous B.L.T., made with bacon, lettuce, and tomato on toasted rye bread. Mark’s Deli already has several other locations including Boston, Massachusetts, Brooklyn, New York, and Portland, Maine. (2 points) Please Help. I have tried doing this for 3 days, my mom wont go through it with me. And the sentences is the only thing im stuck on. i need to get my Language Grade Up Quickly. Before it become and F.
Heres the second one. all fixed
Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing up the balloons, their least favorite task. They hate how the balloons have to be completely full or it won't float. On the other side of the gym, Sam is practicing the cheer routine. if she doesn't practice, she could embarrass herself. The last to arrive was Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone does their part, the pep rally will be a success.
This summer, a popular sandwich shop called Mark’s Deli will be opening downtown. The deli will offer free tastings of their most popular sandwiches on Friday, May 10; Saturday, May 1; and Sunday, May 12. The samples will include mouth-watering bites of the Veggie Deluxe, a wrap with roasted vegetables and hummus; the Italian Combo, a selection of Italian meats and cheeses on a roll; and the famous B.L.T., made with bacon, lettuce, and tomato on toasted rye bread. Mark’s Deli already has several other locations including Boston, Massachusetts; Brooklyn, New York; and Portland, Maine.
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Corrected! Do you see the corrections I made? Do you understand them?
The PTA agreed to fund a fall field trip. The seventh-grade class vote on the destination. Some vote for the zoo, others vote for the museum. After the vote, the student council announces that the zoo is the winner. Fixed it.
Most of this is correct. Errors are in bold.
Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing up the balloons, their least favorite task. They hate how the balloons have to be completely full or it won't float. On the other side of the gym, Sam is practicing the cheer routine. if she doesn't practice, she could embarrass herself. The last to arrive was Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone does their part, the pep rally will be a success.
I have already tried it was wrong.
This is what i wrote. So This is a clause that generally modifies a noun, or a noun phrase and is often introduced by a relative pronoun. Like the words which, that, who, whom, whose. who, whom, that* refers to human. which, that** refers to something thats not human, And whose is Possessive. A nonessential clause is When a sentence has a nonessential adjective clause, the clause is set apart with commas.
Consider each sentence separately. (Seeing all the sentences in paragraph form can be overwhelming.)
Here's how:
The PTA agree to fund a fall field trip.
The seventh-grade class vote on the destination.
Some votes for the zoo, others vote for the museum.
After the vote, the student council announces that the zoo is the winner.
In each sentence, locate the subject. Indicate whether it's singular or plural.
Then locate each sentence's verb. If the subject is singular, is its verb singular? If not, fix it.
If the subject is plural, is its verb plural? If not, fix it.
I Changed their to There. <~~No. What word is "their" trying to refer to?
It to they <~~Right
and
was to were <~~Right
Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing up the balloons, their least favorite task. They hate how the balloons have to be completely full or they won't float. On the other side of the gym, Sam is practicing the cheer routine. if she doesn't practice, she could embarrass herself. The last to arrive were Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone does her part, the pep rally will be a success.
Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing up the balloons, their least favorite task. They hate how the balloons have to be completely full or they won't float. On the other side of the gym, Sam is practicing the cheer routine. if she doesn't practice, she could embarrass herself. The last to arrive were Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone does there part, the pep rally will be a success.
The word "everyone" can be deceiving. Even though it refers to many people, the word is singular — as you can tell by "one" in it.
The sentence should read like this: As long as everyone does his or her right part, the pep rally will be a success.
okay well that helps.
wait so all of them have to have the word right in it?
Maybe. But which ONE word is "their" referring to (incorrectly).
I THINK I GOT IT
it's fixed
The relative pronoun "that" is used with an essential clause and the relative pronoun "which" is used with a nonessential clause. In three to five sentences, explain when to use each pronoun and the difference between the two relative clauses. (2 points)
thank you 65xDares
You wrote:
The PTA agreed to fund a fall field trip.
Okay, you have made the verb here in the past tense, and it's correct IF all the other sentences have past tense verbs, too. Do they?
Yes i do thank you
does that go for all of them or just that one you explained?
Their is referring to all the people there.
i don't know but i will change it.
Okay it is her then
Never mind im done. i finished. ill have my mom help me with the rest..
hello it's been an hour. are you still there Writeacher?
The PTA agree to fund a fall field trip. The seventh-grade class vote on the destination. Some votes for the zoo, others vote for the museum. After the vote, the student council announces that the zoo is the winner. is this right wrtiteteacher?
I Changed their to There.
It to they and
was to were
As long as everyone does the right part, the pep rally will be a success.
As long as everyone does her part, the pep rally will be a success.
alright.
Is semicolons for the 3 sentence or the second still?
are you still there writeacher?
So i did the 3rd on my own my mom said that she would check it but i need help on the last one.
Rewrite the following paragraph, replacing commas with semicolons where they are needed.
This summer, a popular sandwich shop called Mark’s Deli will be opening downtown. The deli will offer free tastings of their most popular sandwiches on Friday, May 10, Saturday, May 11, and Sunday, May 12. The samples will include mouth-watering bites of the Veggie Deluxe, a wrap with roasted vegetables and hummus, the Italian Combo, a selection of Italian meats and cheeses on a roll, and the famous B.L.T., made with bacon, lettuce, and tomato on toasted rye bread. Mark’s Deli already has several other locations including Boston, Massachusetts, Brooklyn, New York, and Portland, Maine.
And the very last one.
thank
Uno I think that is right
Can someone fix this for me?
I love to take my dogs to the park. I make sure to bring fresh water their leashes and extra treats whenever we go. My dogs are a lot bigger than most dogs so I have to make sure the park is not too crowded when we go. My dogs get really excited when they see other dogs and they bark so loud. Sometimes people get worried when they hear my dogs bark but they are really friendly and just want to play. After a long walk to the park my dogs usually sleep for an hour.
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Not all, no. The first one is dealing with subject-verb agreement. You need to read the directions for each paragraph carefully.
Revise the following paragraph for correct pronoun agreement.
These are the directions for the second one. "Correct pronoun agreement" means that if you use a pronoun to refer to a noun in that sentence or paragraph, then the pronoun needs to "match" the noun: singular or plural? etc.
Read the directions for the others carefully.
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Right!
Now … study these for comma and semicolon uses:
https://www.englishclub.com/writing/punctuation-comma.htm
and
https://www.englishclub.com/writing/punctuation-semi-colon.htm
Then post your re-written paragraph and I'll check it.