Bradbury's first pay as a writer, at age 14, was for a joke he sold to George Burns to use on the Burns and Allen radio show.

Question

Bradbury's first pay as a writer, at age 14, was for a joke he sold to George Burns to use on the Burns and Allen radio show.

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Would you check this sentence and correct any errors?

Answer 1

Here's how I'd write that sentence, including putting the title of the radio show in italics.

Bradbury's first pay as a writer, at age 14, was for a joke he sold to George Burns to use on The Burns and Allen Show, a radio program.

(OR … you can omit the last 3 words and the comma after the title of the show.)

Answer 2

Bradbury's first payment as a writer, at age 14, was for a joke he sold to George Burns to use on the Burns and Allen radio show.

Answer 3

Upon reviewing the sentence, there seem to be no grammatical errors. It is well-structured and conveys the intended meaning clearly. Therefore, no corrections are necessary.