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okay, I need to do a powerpoint for this career "computer animation"

I need help writing a simple, short, punchy paragraph or list. Yet able to get the message across to the audience.

Heres the question I have to answer:

What is a computer animator?

Computer animation involves the manipulation of still images to create the illusion of movement. An animator produces multiple images called frames. When sequenced together rapidly, these frames create an illusion of movement known as animation. A computer-animated image can be two or three dimensional.

This can include websites, online advertisements and video games. Animators can find full-time employment with movie or television production companies, with advertisers, web design firms, video game companies or with animation firms.

That's my paragraph, I think the first part is fine, but I'm wondering do I need to add the second part?

Thank you,

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asked by Larry
  1. Computer animation involves the manipulation of still images to create the illusion of movement. An animator produces multiple images called frames. When sequenced together rapidly, these frames create an illusion of movement known as animation. A computer-animated image can be two or three dimensional.
    There are redundancies here. I'd do some sentence-combining to get rid of any repetition.

    This can include websites, online advertisements and video games. Animators can find full-time employment with movie or television production companies, with advertisers, web design firms, video game companies or with animation firms.
    The first sentence is weird. WHAT can include...? Or do you mean that animators work on websites, etc.? Also, delete the second and third instances of "with" in the second sentence

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