Research paper for photography

Hi! This is an essay I wrote on Duane Michals for my photography class. Can someone please proofread - I'm rusty on writing essays. Also, can you give my comments and critiques, especially conclusion...I think it's a little weak... THANKS! p.s. I started it off with a poem by him, but I left that part out of the pasted essay below.

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