Hi! This is an essay I wrote on Duane Michals for my photography class. Can someone please proofread - I'm rusty on writing essays. Also, can you give my comments and critiques, especially conclusion...I think it's a little weak... THANKS! p.s. I started it off with a poem by him, but I left that part out of the pasted essay below.

Of course! I'd be happy to help you proofread your essay on Duane Michals and provide some comments and critiques. Please go ahead and paste your essay, and I'll do my best to assist you.