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revise the following sentence to use modifiers correctly, clearly and effectively. *= revised sentence
1.The student cafeteria is operated by a college food service system chain.
* A chain of food service system operates the student cafeteria.

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asked by sis
  1. You left out the word "college" in your revision. And does the entire chain operate the cafeteria? I did a double-take reading it the way you have written it. Is there a better way?

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    posted by Reed
  2. I'll check back later this evening to see what you come up with. :) It's dinner time on the west coast where I am.

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    posted by Reed
  3. OK,here is the revision.I think this makes more sense.

    The college food service system operates a chain of student cafeteria.

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    posted by sis
  4. This looks good -- except for the last word.

  5. Ok Thank you.

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