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Revise the following word groups to remove all fragments and/or parallelism errors.

I like baseball because it is fun and teaches me about the sport.

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I like baseball, it teaches me about the sport and it’s also fun.

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asked by Andrew
  1. You still have a run-on in there. Where should you divide this into 2 sentences?

    posted by Writeacher
  2. Well, wait!

    In addition to dividing this into two complete sentences, you also need to do something about the strange phrasing. This doesn't make sense to me: "it teaches me... "

    What is "it"?

    posted by Writeacher

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